Order the steps: tighten a sentence
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- Steps
- Find the real subject and the real action
- Rewrite it in the active voice
- State it positively rather than as a denial
- Cut every word that adds nothing
- Move the words you want emphasised to the end
Strunk's advice, applied as a procedure. Source: The Elements of Style, William Strunk Jr. (1918), public domain.